Imagine…a world without electricity, what would you do? I know you guys are thinking so what? i hardly use electricity anyways ,but no electricity means no electronics! GASP that means no tweeting, texting or instagraming. Yes if you didn’t notice by now you do need electricity to power those things. Sometimes we don’t think about what it was like before electricity was invented, what did people do before that?
As the years have progressed we have been even more reliant on electricity. When electricity was first invented was it for the better or for the worst? Hi I’m Jessica and that’s what I’m going to be talking about. So as many people think that electricity is the best thing in the world I have a different opinion. I feel that electricity has taken over the world, for example little kids… teachers and parents feel the need to teach kids on things like I pads, what happened to a simple piece of paper or imagination. Back before electricity little kids learnt to explore the world and would beg to go outside, and if you haven’t noticed when the power goes out were hopeless we don’t know what to do with ourselves. That being said do we rely on electricity too much?! The answer is yes! Close your eyes, imagine waking up at 6;30 and going to bed at 5;30 because after that it’s too dark out, where would your days go1 take note that now electricity has been invented our neighborhoods have expanded from each other , when there was no electricity our communities weren’t communities they were families unlike now where nobody knows each other and now everybody is fighting over wifi. Even though electricity is very convenient and has helped us for centuries is it time to take a break? Yes I challenge you to take a stand and save power, go explore maybe you will be the next Einstein.
* I need to revise it because it talks too much about electronics *
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3 comments:
Unique idea Jessica for your speech. I think you are right in that you may need to add a little more to your speech. I am worried it will not meet the time limit. I am looking forward to hearing your expression when you deliver this speech.
Jarrod does have some valid points in his comment - even though it is a speech it is a good idea to also make sure to edit and proofread. Speeches are also samples for your multi-paragraph writing. Come into flex or see me in class and I will help you further.
Jarrod - review the information on how to comment and offer constructive criticism (remember the constructive sandwich?) This is a skill also that we are working on.
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