Speech Draft


1 comments:

Jaden Son said...

Kevin, that was good speech and i think your topic was really good. Saving lives. Anyway i liked your hook. It grabbed my attetion because i think your hook was powerful and strong. it was also interesting too because i never heard any sppech talk about saving lives and stuff.I liked how you tell us how to donate organ and all the instructions we need to donate organ, and lastly i think your conclusion was really good. it was powerful.
overall it was great speech.

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