Space Jump Response - Johnny W.
That guy is either crazy, or brave. To get to that spot would be scary enough, but jumping off is another thing. What if the parachute didn't go off? Well, it would hurt, a lot. Nick and Richard were talking about how it look like Felix fainted while he was falling, but that is obviously not true. I wonder what it wàs like be to above the earth, at the edge of space. Was there less gravity there? Or did it feel the same up there and down here. Also, I wonder what they did with the platform / seat thing he jumped off from, is it still floating in (almost) space or did it fall? What if space became like the ocean, like how we threw stuff out in the ocean and now the ocean is polluted, what if space became polluted? But now I'm getting off topic. Felix really deserved that world record.
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Johnny, I can see you are a thinker and you used this response to respond to the video, your peers and even beyond the video experience to inquiring about the "space junk" and whether space might end up like our oceans, making another connection. Whew! That is a lot to consider for one paragraph. I think you need to break these into different paragraphs and include an introduction / conclusion that links them all together. This could be a powerful multiparagraph composition all inspired by the one video. Alternatively, you need to pick one area to focus on per paragraph, otherwise your readers, myself and beyond, may be confused as to all the directions you hint at but don't follow through discussing. I am excited to see where this post goes and we will talk more in class.
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